My conference today with Ms. Pavletic was very helpful. She gave me a lot of helpful tips to strengthen my paper. Sometimes I really struggle with revising though. Her suggestions seem like they will require me to change a lot in my paper and I'm bad about that. You know that whole thing she said in class about not being attached to your papers? Yeah, that's me. I get to where I just really don't want to get rid of a sentence because I like it, even though I know I need to just erase it. Hopefully this last revision won't take too long though!